Done as part of the Multimedia Storytelling Saturday editing workshop.

Class feedback:

  • don’t show entire walking sequence; cut to next scene once she gets up- the viewer understands she’s in motion
  • less time with counting- break it up maybe with a shot to coins
  • make transitions less choppy


  • get extra shots of details
  • make sure to finish every scene
  • let the camera roll a little before and after